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| Angelic Vampire Queen Amaya 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseIt was very good. I would have liked it better if his brother saved him, or if nobody saved him but he didn't die. I'm just messed up, so ignore me. wells, good job ^.^ |
| Noel Rosa 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome! All in character, and it really grabs you! |
| The Almighty Ruler of Drago... 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. But next time make Sho actaully jump off the cliff, but he lives and then have Judai (did I spell it write, I'm so used to using the name Jaden) save him or a made up character save him or maybe you could...*starts rambling about a bunch of different plots* Anyway, that was pretty good, but it could've been better. |