What a great opening! You have Natalie and Monk down pat. I hope you will continue it at some point.

great job. i would say keep going..but its been almost 2 and a half years since you wrote this..so im guessing the story's not gonna be continued. =[

why have you not posted more chapters in over a year? *begs* .. please more chappys!

Amazing! I absolutely love it.

this is really good. i could picture them actually having that converstation. i know that you started this a while ago, but i really hope that you can find time to finish it. there really arn't enough adrian/natalie stories. anyway, your writing style is great.

Hot damn! You've got them down wonderfully. Can't wait to see what will happen. *alertlist*

Your writing is awesome (made even better by the fact that the words "AdrianNatalie fic" came from your fingertips), and I can't wait to read more!

You so have to continue! I'm sleepy right now so sorry I can't shell out any advice or what not... but I'll dwell on that and get back to you later.

looks good so far. keep it going. update soon. We need more romance fics. all the ones we have now are taking to long to be updated (mine included).

I really like what you've done so far. Update soon, because you have me intrigued now. Can't wait to read the next part. :)

Cool story - I love Christmas stories; they're like a premature Christmas gift. ^^ Hope you continue soon - and we get some shippyness. Very in-character. Keep up the good work.

Best regards,
Dare

E- this is gonna be a great fic- i already am enjoying it-- please write more-- love me some adrian/nat- teehee