Cute! Really cute!

i love this story, it's so sweet!

Nice piece of story, but I hoped for another chapter! Anyway there's not enough M/W fics on this site!

loved it! there aren't that many Max/White stories so it is good to see them on here, and they are always fun to read.

These are not really stories because not enough happens. I'd say they are more like vignettes except they are not profound enough. The ideas are cute. I enjoyed it while I was reading it but when I got to the end, I didn't like the way it just stopped. It was a bit frustrating. I think if you take the time to develope a plot you'll have a really excellent story for us. I hope you continue writing, I'd love to see where you take this potential of yours.

Cute story, however I still believe it needs developing and more length -- when it starts to get interesting (max mentions alec saving her, and you can see all the possibiliities of an argument a la Vee017's Family Getaway) the story ends.

It's great to see someone able to produce so many stories in such a short time frame! keep up the good work -- just don't leave us hainging with all these unfinished stories ;)