Love it. Especially the ending.

oh, angsty, yet well done.

Sai

Not that long, I guess if you consider Itachi with the shocking revelation about him being an anti-hero, he's OOC here but well, we were all in the dark.

Nonetheless, I think this is an excellent one-shot, stylish, engaging, dark, and gripping. Thanks for writing this.

Dude this story is so ninja u totaly know wat ur doing plz write more plz I love HinaxIta cupoles stories plz write more =^_^= yay
P.S Ninja mean in my vocab cool cuz cool is too old

Wow...this was absolutely amazing. Deliciously dark and very saddening; an awesome piece of work.

wow.

Sweet.

Wow, I love your style! Itachi is the epitome of sexiness in your story! Love the cruelty and just about everything else! Awesome story!

Woah... That is weird... Are you implying that Itachi was mollested when he was little?

Why the hell is a female who enjoys sex a **?You must be either a virgin or a guy.Jeesh ,would you prefer screams and blood?Its nature to get some enjoyment from what will eventually come to fruit in blood and screaming and end in 20 or so years of slavery then dismisal.Wake up! Hm,you could be religious...br,this is one of the scariest stories I have ever inflicted upon myself.** indeed,a ** is someone who doesn't enjoy sex yet has it to get affection ,attention ect (marrige,ring a bell anyone?). You seem to have this a liitle backwards.Originally ** meant a women who didn't keep a very clean space ie; dust bunnies used to be called **'s wool.Except for that disgusting peice of anti femaleism I really liked your reasoning. Do not call this a flame either,it is constructive criticism. Again,the fic was a good idea and presented

Hell yeah! Love that ending line.

Forget that, I liked the whole damn thing, short as it was from start to the lovely, lovely little finish toward the end. I thought he was gonna go for Neji, but the idea of Hinata killing everyone and everything and evilly leaving her older cousin like a reverse version of Sasuke is beyond cool.

Maybe I'm just evil. (waves flag) Go evil!

Dark and creepy, just the way i like it.

Ah...I've read fics where Neji is the one to massacre the Hyuuga clan, but never one where Hinata is the killer. 'Hinata is a little **, once she gets going.' < This line suprised me to no end. Me likes!

...awesome, ne...? I loved the way you portrayed Itachi and how he convinced Hinata in his own...morbid, disturbing way, lol! ^_^ Loved it! Great story!

Sayonara,

Tenshi-Battosai

Wicked plz update