Thank you. Thank you so much for giving Wheeljack a death scene. You have no idea how much it bothered me that he never got one.

Very nice! The three 'Con Gestalts ganging up on the Autobots could only equal deathy doom.

The mood was set really well, it feels really dark, and really grim, which is how the Battle of Autobot City should be displayed as.

Keep up the great work! If ya run out of Autobots who died at Autobot City, ya can always do takes on those who survived it, or those who weren't there (Such as Bumblebee, or Jazz) or even Prime's final thoughts before he died.

...Oops. I'll fix it when I get back home. Ya know, switch Sunny with Sides and all that. Well, Sides was fighting with Magnus, Tracks and Red Alert during the Devastator-incident where Red was killed, so he's there. Don't expect a new chapter too soon, because I still haven't decided which Bot I'm gonna take next.

And you can guess I'm not gonna write about Red anymore, 'cause he was killed in the first chapter already. And this 2nd chapter even tells you why Thundercracker and Skywarp are so busted when they show up inside Astrotrain. I never realized that until I read that again. Hey, which of the Insecticons got crunched while eating the doors? I ain't sure about Bombshell. Where was he?

Sad, sweet story. Just one problem. Sunstreaker is flying the shuttle that brings Prime and the Dinobots to Autobot City. He also shows up disembarking with Prime and Hound just before Prime goes on a Decepticon Aft-Kicking fest. These two scenes were after Wheeljack and Windcharger were shown dead.

no not them too *cry* BUHUHUHUHUU

Hey, that was pretty good. I always wondered what happened to Bluestreak during the Battle for Autobot City... Along with most of the other Autobots ^^; What would be fun for this fic would be that each chapter could represent one of the Season 1/2 charachers being killed in the Battle, ala Wheeljack, Tracks, Windcharger, etc.

I especially love the Mark Twain quote at the end.

Aw...

;-; mrr...

Always wondered what happened to Blue... *sniffs* Great fic.