heh... I can imagine link just dancing the Darunia dance. Funny. Really funny.

HAhahahahahahahahahahahaha!! That was GREAT! Wow, that was so funny! I loved the end, when the three of them are doing the combination Kamaro/Darunia/Scarecrow dance, and everyone else starts doing it!

This story was really well written, and VERY funny! Good job!

There's only ONE itsy bitsy teeny weeny (yellow polka-dot bikini--haha, sorry, I couldn't resist!) thing that bugged me. You said Link's hair was brown, but it is, in fact, blonde. Other than that, it was GREAT!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
HILARIOUS!
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
RayxJade

lol, when I read that ingo got into the club, I was thinking.

"Hey, wait a second. Where did the bouncer go?"

Im glad that he came in and throttled him, lol

Anyway, nice story.

i really liked how you captured link's inability to dance. that just made him seem real. great fic, great characterization

I love it! This was a great little story. I really like the part where Link had to tell the guard Zelda was a thief. It made me laugh out loud!

And Link dancing... oh, man. Poor, uncoordinated Link.

Good job!

BB

Haha, that was amazing! I really loved the relationship you portrayed between Link and Zelda. And to be honest, I always somewhat resented it when Malon and Zelda got jealous over each other, so that was great! Hehe...Link trying to dance. I'm not even trying to imagine what monstrosity he must have conjured up in that moment in the spotlight.