Aww, I loved it! A really cute chapter about Quasi. They need more fics about him. He's adorable! Even though it was short, it was sweet and to the point! *favorites*

aw... Like very much. As with all good poems, too bad it's so short.

beautiful and breath-taking. i adored it. wonderful rhyming scheme and feelings. great job. amazing poem.

Is this a villanelle? You know, French-style poetry? I sense some of that here. Either way, impressive! I loved it.

I like this poem quite a lot, though I sort of tripped over the last lines of the 1st and 3rd stanzas a bit (or was that purposefully done? Hm...) Anyway, good job and keep writing!

this is good. I can't do poems, good job

Oh... so pretty... I love the juxtaposition of his view and what he provides to the outside world... great poem! :D