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Reviews for: House Húrin
Alaenor-Skybird
2008-12-05 . chapter 3
I really like these! They do a very good job of showing the emotion being felt, and of adding your own thoughts while keeping the speakers in character. I liked the comparison of the sword and horn, breaking and reforging, especially. They're fascinating pieces of work, and very insightful.
Raksha The Demon
2006-04-12 . chapter 1
This is well done - I like the last line, with the raising of Faramir to hope and stewardship, after showing Denethor's final failure.
Helle Delta
2005-11-24 . chapter 1
Wow, I really like this! The rhymes seem fait=rly effortless and it flows nicely. Go you!
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