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| TreeHuggenHippy7117 2008-06-05 ch 2,  | abusethe whole floo powder thingy didn't happen until the 2 book/movie update soon ! |
| KIRA FIRE WOLF 2008-05-29 ch 2, | abuseum |
| Maylayn 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseOkay, the idea is good and other than one majorly annoying point, it's pretty well written. But you don't use "these". Any sort of verbal speech needs to be contained within these, or it becomes incredibly hard to read and awfully confusing for the reader. I went forward to the last chapter, noticed you said you were redoing this fic, and went back one more chapter. You're using them there, but you need to redo any chapters that don't have them. I don't want to be mean, or sound it, so please don't take this badly. But I want to read this and, as it is, it's way too hard to do so without getting a headache. But! I will continue to read, I just thought that maybe you should, you know, just change that one problem? Maylayn |
| Makurayami Ookami 2008-05-12 ch 16, | abuseokay. |
| The-Sponge-Who-Could-Fly 2008-05-09 ch 16, | abuseHey no worries. Take as long as you need and i hope the reconstruction of your stories goes well. Good Luck! |
| Nightmare2Day 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOH NO! Voldemort threatens me with his wand? Wait a minute... "Look, I have nothing againsty The Dark Lord but... I'm way more evil than him... what's he gonna do? Point my eyes out? Anyway... good story. |
| teralynn 2007-12-21 ch 15, | abusewhat happens next? |
| Draggah95 2007-07-26 ch 5, | abuseyou also have bad grammer you don't say butt you say waist |
| Draggah95 2007-07-26 ch 4, | abuseYou got the whole thing wrong. First Voldemort was a Dark Lord by the time Harry's parents went to school and Hagrid was Gameskeeper and the weasleys son Bill would have to have been in school near near Harry's parents so you are stupid and i almost never flame anybody can't you read the second book it says the chamber was opened fifty years ago and i don't tink they were killed by a Voldemort that didn't exist |
| Princess Felton 2007-07-23 ch 15, | abuseUPDATE SOON! It's a great story so far and I want to find out what happens with Voldie next!! |
| AmeliaBaggins 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great read I think that theory could be true with Harry as Voldemort's son. Good job!! And have a great Spring Break!! |
| Merrymow 2007-03-16 ch 15, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| lina239 2007-03-12 ch 15, | abusethis story was a masterpiece. I don't see where you got the idea that it stunk. |
| lina239 2007-03-12 ch 5, | abuseDid you guys take away his wand cuz he is not killing everyone in the room? |
| lina239 2007-03-12 ch 2, | abuseWhat kind of Dark Lord waits around for a muggle to write him into a story? That is too funny. |