I love this. The plot seems to be well-crafted (every chapter has a purpose), the writing is superb, and just everything about it is just so compelling. I *want* to know everything that's happening, to understand what James is up to and figure out what it is that he isn't telling Lily or why she can't seem to see how absolutely amazing the two of them are together. The whole story is just so refreshing and the characters are written so well and realistically portrayed. I'm seriously in love with your work, and I know it's been years, but I hope you plan on continuing this one day because it is absolutely brilliant. Please update soon!

Lovely! Hope you plan to update (even though it's been quite a bit!).

Wow, major drunkness, yeah?

Again...cackle. I love your story.

Pizza... oh boy. Long night indeed.

Kiss a toilet seat... cackle.

Oh this is beautiful, the awkwardness the horror... okay maybe not so much...

Loving the cookie argument!

Oh, me likes. Especially the Sirius/Lily tension... what fun! And I like Witty!Lily, too.

Oh, interesting. I'm curious to read more!

i really like this story so far, but i'm starting to feel bad for sirius! i love his character alot and i really hope lily doesn't end up hurting him to bad

Ok, I'm a little confused. In the first chapter, Lily said she was dating Sirius and now she just has a juge crush on him? Clarify please...

cewl

Loved it! Update soon?

This was a very sweet chapter. :) I dunno how else to put it; something about this chapter just makes me smile.