Not too bad. :) I like how you even included that beginning movie sequence and all the events up to it.

Hello. I just went back through my reviews and realized that I hadn't reviewed you back like I had promised. I'm sorry!

Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your fic...you're a great writer! This story is amazing!

Interesting take on the intro to Quake II. While it doesn't use the main character's perspective (Bitterman) on Stroggo, it still stays consistent with the general intro with a twist ending. My only complaint with the story is that in the game's intro movie, it's revealed that almost the entire first wave of marines were blasted by an EMP attack and killed, leaving only a handfull to operate, not a whole company. Yeah, I know, it's just a story, I should let up. Eh. Good though, pretty good.

Cool. I like the Starcraft reference.

Great story, and the fact that it's raynor in there makes it even better, i could see him doin all this stuff too, keep it comin.