I never thought of Midgar that way before. That's pretty neat. Now I have to go and think about this... Oh, and whose POV was this from? I'm guessing Cloud, but I really have no idea...
Dude, I am soooooo proud of this one! (pats herself on back) but uh, i forgot a disclaimer, like i really need one and like anyone will complain. but, oh well i don't own it and never did. there. happy?
Wow, what a description! It captures Midgar's essence perfectly. And what's great, is that it didn't really seem like a story, it seemed very... poetic. Great job!