Reviews for The Isle of Nephiram

Reviews For: The Isle of Nephiram

JSB 2006-01-20 ch 2,	abuseYeah, reminds me a lot of Vampires: the Masquerade. And how come I never see these stories, ever...damnit. Hm, you seem to know a lot about vampires, though, do they still have to give them some of their blood every now and again? And one last question, are there an OC option for this fic too? You also forgot another race, the Lupin clan, or wolf, wheres vampires without werewolves.
TheWatcherandReader 2005-12-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseSo, you've added an entirely new species of laguz. But how will this affect the existing plot of Path of Radiance. Will the hero join the Greil Mercenaries, or will he abandon all and set out for a new land. Perhaps he will become a figure head for the night laguz. I shall watch and see. Keep on updating.
Whitewash 2005-11-27 ch 2,	abuseAre vampires cool? nudge Well, I don't like them. As for the story itself, it has some potential, and lots of space for plot development. Plus, I like your writing style. :) As of currently, there isn't much to critique on, except that, well, don't you think Melissa would be sobbing right now instead of being fascinated with this vampire dude? I mean she's a slave for some guy she doesn't even know, could be killed at any moment, lost all of her family and friends, and well, I guess she'd be in a current state of depression. Unless she fell in love with this guy which would be kinda weird. (SUPER NITPICK: Melissa Young is a weird name for a laguz... Or maybe it's just me.) One question... What do the night laguz change into, exactly? Vampire-vampires or vampire bats? Actually, a nice suggestion is that they turn into bats instead of vampire-vampires because, according to Tellian definition, laguz are half-human, half-beast. Of course, you don't have to take the suggestion. Just staying canon is all. I'll stick this onto story alert so I can critique you more. >D
somepersonxP 2005-11-26 ch 2,	abusevampires are awesome. wel...time to go do the HW that ive been procrastinating on since a week ago. >_>
Toki Kishitani 2005-11-26 ch 2,	abuseCC: ^.^ "...hate to tell you, but your food burned." Priceless. I really am loving this story. Don't give up on it. ...Heh. ^.^; I should probably take my own advice... looks at FP lookup ...I probably should upload chapter one... >_>;
Toki Kishitani 2005-11-25 ch 1,	abuseCC: Cool... I hope you update soon, 'cuz this is intriguiging... (did I spell that right...?) Your descriptions are very good as are your characterizations. A reluctant vampire... Hm... Update soon, 'kay? ^.^
somepersonxP 2005-11-24 ch 1,	abuse...vampire laguz? tries to think of something else to say i guess it's ok...reminds me of the book Darkangel by pierce, which i did like. so update soon?

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