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| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-05-26 ch 3,  | abuseWow... just... wow. No other words come to mind. Amazing. Very well done. CT |
| skywalker05 2008-02-23 ch 3, | abuseAw...*is overcome with emotion* There was some real heart-wrenching stuff in this, and the scene with Anakin and Luke racing is such a perfect afterlife for them...I also really liked the beginning of chapter 2, it was worded cleverly, and, well, I was glad that Luke wasn't completely gone...excellent fic, a real roller-coaster ride of an AU. |
| Argenteus Draco 2007-11-16 ch 3, | abuseVery nice, very nice indeed. I particularly liked the idea of visiting in dreams instead of as a Force-Ghost - that was much better left until the very end. I also liked that although this was a very heavy and poignant story, it did have some lighter, humorous aspects. Han's dream was probably my favorite, especially the bit about "Darth Daddy." I thought you did a very good job keeping everyone in character as well. Good job. Now I get to return to Walk Like Men. |
| frodogenic 2007-04-19 ch 3, | abuseFinally...a beautiful, credible rendering of the Anakin-gets-healed premise. I am in awe. |
| ILDV 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseSIGH. Wonderful. |
| BabaBiP 2006-12-14 ch 3, | abuse10+ |
| Mord-Sith Rahl 2006-12-10 ch 3, | abuse... *GLOMPS!* This was so sad! But hey, Vader is finally healed without the Force getting into things. It's so SAD! I'm going back to the happier ones! *sniffle* |
| phantom-jedi1 2006-11-18 ch 3, | abuseWonderful job! You met the challenge well and gave we readers a gem of a story while you were at it! Good work. phantom_jedi |
| Lady Eivel 2006-10-08 ch 3, | abuseIt's a gorgeous story- I love it. Poignant, sad, and I'm still having to fight back tears. Beautiful. |
| herc009 2006-10-05 ch 3, | abuseAn awsome story. I only hope some day I can write as creatively as you. Keep up the great work. |
| twisterblake 2006-10-01 ch 3, | abusehey great chapter i hope that vader will train leia to be a jedi knight. great chapte |
| Merklin 2006-09-18 ch 3, | abuseYeesh, three in as many or less days, you're probably getting sick of seeing my pen name on reviews by now, lol. Anyways, this fic was very sad, but very good as well. Interesting and believable ending change to ROTJ, and you kept the characters true to themselves. I saw no OC. (if i sound like i repeat myself in reviews, it's because your fics all seem to have the same excellent qualities. and that's truth, not sarcasm or a lie or etc.) |
| Dark Lady of the Circus 2006-09-07 ch 3, | abuseThat was excellent. You're right, it was a tear jerker, but it was the good kind of tears, not the OH MY GOD THIS IS HORRIBLE WHEN WILL IT BE OVER kind of tears. You're an exceptional writer. I applaud you tremendously. Not many people can write a perky "Adventures of Darth Vader and Me" and turn around and churn out something like this (Right now Lady DiMera, who writes amazing Phantom of the Opera phic is the only one who comes to mind). So, y'know, keep writing. I've got trig homework to do, so I can't read more, but I will soon. Caroline |
| SithSnoopy 2006-07-23 ch 3, | abuseOuch. *Sniff* Very good story, but... ouch. :( |
| ilovethestorys 2006-06-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseVery good. It was sort of depressing but at the same time a little heart warming with the forgivness and the sacrifice. I have read others for this challenge and you really looked at it differntly. It was very good though it was sad. Great job. |