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Reviews For: A Bet

mj0621
2006-05-28
ch 1,
abuseaw...:) nice fic...keep on writing SM fics..SM fics rule!
joala
2005-12-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's my one of a favourite story!:)
lostwords
2005-12-10
ch 1,
abuseAw cute!
runawaynun
2005-11-30
ch 1,
abuseI love how you used the yucky Franky line of "Mind your own business" and brought it into your fic.

Ah -- fluff and explanation for the possessiveness of Mac at the autopsy!
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2005-11-29
ch 1,
abuseI'm hooked and I think we need more! LOL

*sighs happily* I loved it! I'm hoping for more...
Silent Cobra
2005-11-25
ch 1,
abuseyes! that was awesome!! Write more MS stories please!
ellie
2005-11-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww...very cute! You brought a smile to my face on this dreadful day! lol
Clueseeker
2005-11-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAlthough, someone mentioned your spelling and grammer in antoher review, I can tell English may not be your native language and considering that you've done a fantastic job with this story. Even though there a few rough spots in grammer there was a good flow to the story and I understood exactly what you were conveying.

As for the story it was very tender and sweet. A good read.
fruitbat00
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuseLovely. Hope you are going to write more...SOON.
I liked Mac getting teritorial and squirming as Hawkes overheard him booking the restaurant.

Just wish CBS would see things our way.
Remote Control Princess
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuseIs there anything better than MacStella fluff, with added Hawkes-giggles?!

Answer: Nope!

Much love!! Becs x
homeplate
2005-11-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseCheck your spelling; also at times, you mixed some words up, so proofread. Otherwise, good job.
Steeldust-01
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuse*sigh*

this is such a sweet little story !
Hope to see more Mac/Stella stories of yours!
Sarcastic Realist
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was cute. I hope you write more soon; I like your stories.
Volonta forte
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuseI am offically in love with you and your story! Write more please!!
mizukimarr910
2005-11-23
ch 1,
abuseah i want more please this ruled and personally i think stella's bet was a good one. haha please keep writing and update again soon.

thanx mizukimarr910
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