 Of Kings and Queens 8/10/11 . chapter 1... Jesus. This was crap... You've created a Mary sue, you know that right? Well, since I don't want to waste ten minutes telling you how sh!t this was, I've made it my mission to make sure you see this YouTube video. It's of this girl reviewing your story. Just remove the spaces and all. I assume you know the drill.
http:/ www . youtube . com/ watch?vmVfXHTmZkAc |
 Shadowclanwarrior 7/20/11 . chapter 1Congrates, you have a Mary Sue :D! Seriosuly, you named your character after you... wow... just wow... |
 random-person 3/28/11 . chapter 1 i'm sorry but your character's a pure breed Mary sue oh and only a few cats have magical powers.And please try to explain the fight bits and moonbeam dancers kidnap a little better.and why did Macavity want moonbeamdancer and whats his problem with the jellicles |
 yeew 3/20/11 . chapter 1 Pure garbage. Get grammar |
 Adi Sagestar 8/10/07 . chapter 1Um... not.. very good? |
 LadyYuiHongo 7/12/01 . chapter 1Very good fic!Kinda reminds me of Sailor Moon in a way... |