This is dark but that's ok, and Genma deserved it. Now does Ranma live or die? Or is her memory knocked loose by the Shishihokodan? She might then wander off after coming to and finding a dead man(or panda) near herself. She could wander to Juban and be found by Amy Mizuno. Then life her life as a girl cursed to become a boy with hot water.

Wow, an original idea for the first time in quite a while. Not realistic, but still, it's nice to read a non-retread. Good job.

This has to be continued with ranma staying and being helped to finaly grow up he's still very much a child in many ways and no one seems to notice this everyone seems to treat him as an adult

Very good, Jason-san. Well written, a good look at Ranma's problems, and a possible end to the whole shebang right there. Keep it up. Note- Shi Shi Hokodan is three words, not one.

Yeah, I liked that one. It's a new idea as far as I know, Ranma killing his father and without even realising it. I'd like it to continue, but maybe it works better the way it is now. Characters are ok, I like your Ranma. Good luck.

Good mechanics, good writing style, and good idea on this story. Please continue.

Makes no sense. Ranma was thinking a little too clearly to mistakenly kill his father, who he loves. I could see it happening if it was a momentary thing--like one fast counter that killed him in a second--but here Ranma, while thinking perfectly clearly (we were, after all, in his head--his thoughts weren't confused at all, just stupid), beat his father to death slowly. That's sort of creepy and not at all in character.

I think Genma would have fled the minute he took real damage, but Ranma being too distracted to know how hard he was hitting his father came across as perfectly natural. Nicely done.

Nice story. Feels a lot more "real" than other fics, actually looks into what might realy happen if someone real went through what Ranma does, instead of the whole lazy 'Ranma talks with someone and changes overnight' deal.

If you want to continue it, do so. If not, don't. It's up to you. If you do though, take your time, explore things. People can't change overnight, and people who are as confused and awkward as Ranma take far more time to make any changes, and usually not all of them are good.

This is pretty good. An all too likely result of Ranma and Genma sparring with Genma never willing to acknowledge he's not in Ranma's league any longer, and Ranma'a subconcious having far too much reason to really pound on Genma.

As to continuing it, up to you. You do have a great start, but it does very well on it's own. On the whole, my feelings on continuing this mirror your own; too many such stories out there, and it's too likely Ranma would simply kill himself. Still...

I think you got them right *doesnt really know though because she's only read first 2 volumes...* NO! CONTINUE! ...please? v.V

Damn good one-shot. Well done. Leave it as is, anymore would ruin it.