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| ariel's atlantica 2008-08-04 ch 1,  | abuseI loved it! I agree that it sounded a little serious to be from Twink's point of view (not squeaky enough, hehe), but maybe we're not giving him enough credit like they said. I was thinking it was Starlite at first, haha. GREAT JOB! Keep it up :) |
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely wondrous!! Rainbow RULES! I absolutely love that girl, as well as the rest of the Kids, but you know how she captures you! ^U^ It was beautiful to think that Rainbow's smile is the same as the original Guardian's, along with the fact that the Kids, Twink, Starlite, and everyone else would give up everything (even their lives) to save her! I LOVE MUSHY, HEART WRENCHING STUFF!! *U* You honestly did an incredibly magnificent job on this, and I increasingly encourage you to keep up the awesome work! ^U^ *U* Ever-so sincerely signed, Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;) |
| Nentikobe 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well written, and I liked it a lot, although it does seem a bit too serious to be from Twink's point of view. But maybe I just don't give him enough credit... |
| JuGgALeTTe4LiFe 2006-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! So descriptive, it followed the series so well. I'm a HUGE Rainbow Brite fan, and it's nice to know that there are excellent creations such as this which reflect it. |
| Kitsune-Kurama-Rose 2005-12-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat a wonderful story. You put a lot of thought into it. |
| Major Ursa 2005-12-04 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. It was surprising that you wrote the story from Twink's prosective. You kept me guessing till the end when Rainbow called his name. Once again, great job! |