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| Gabzalabza 2008-07-14 ch 32, | abuseI read your profile. Look, you could've at least FINISHED the stories you started before you quit fan fic. Leaving it at a most dramatic part. Well, even tho i know its unlikely, i hope you update. Thanx gabzalabza |
| Vampire-Orchid 2008-05-20 ch 16, | abuseOH GOD I Totally enjoyed this chapter...and I totally get why you wrote it. It's so much fun. Thanks for the good laughs...;) |
| Vampire-Orchid 2008-05-20 ch 13, | abuseI'm sorry someone said your stuff was juvenile. I'm 25 and I'm really enjoying this...off to the next chapter :D |
| Vampire-Orchid 2008-05-20 ch 10, | abuseI don't know why...but I loved...loved...loved this chapy!! |
| SoulCatcher12 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI'ts a shame that you don't write stories anymore.I wouold have loved to know what happens in the story... |
| Erialie 2006-09-24 ch 32, | abuseok I don't know what to thnk of Cortessa but this whole story has me hooked please update soon |
| Tellemicus Sundance 2006-09-16 ch 20, | abuseI admit that while I haven't read the story, only choosing this chapter randomly, I can say that this is a most interesting twist on the tale. This apparent darkside Revan has Bastila quickly approaching the darkside as well. Though I dislike this relationship with Carth that you're developing, it just seems wrong to me. Good chapter and with a lot of twists. |
| Sandra Evans 2006-08-24 ch 32, | abuseI love your story. And it is very amusing at how Bastila stuck Carth and Corty together as mates. Anyway, please write a lot more very soon! :D |
| Facing My Failure 2006-07-30 ch 32, | abuseOhh! "in apathy lies death". Very clever, putting a bit of Sith Lords into it. Of course she knows that from Kreia. Very clever. |
| Chrosis 2006-07-01 ch 32, | abuseExcellent, excellent, excellent work so far. I burst out laughing multiple times on dantooine. Also, I can't wait till canderous comes back. Yes, I said WHEN, not IF, WHEN. I'm assuming it's in a badass manner when he saves all their assess in the shadowlands. |
| A Pleasant Reader 2006-07-01 ch 32, anon. | abuseI'm definately impressed with this story. I still think the title is simply the best. I'm missing Canderous. I love your take on him, but Carth is another matter entirely. I feel sorry for him with all your bashing. Can't you give him a teensy break from this whiney-idiot-thing you're taking him through? Mission's personality is adequate. Nothing special, I'm sorry to report, but still good. Now Zaalbar, you have him down great, which is why his sudden insanity took me by surprise. I mean, why did he wait until they were landing instead of before they set off? I understand that he surely had all these emotions built up, but I always thought he was level-headed enough to bleed them off slowly. I can tell that you like Juhani, you play her into quite a lovely light. Usually authors tend to skim over her character. Bastila is...well...it's fascinating how you portray her. She not the ice-** of so many fics, nor is she the naive-feel-sorry-for-her-Bastila of others. You sorta got a mix of the two, and I can't figure out how exactly you accomplished that. Our favorite droid could use some more screen time. I can't wait to meet your Jolee. I'm sure he's going to be great, if he's written with your sense of humor. Story-wise, well, this chapter threw me for a loop. I have no idea where you're taking this anymore. Bastila's life-mate story was quite a shocker. I'm still not sure if that particular plot bunny fits in. It feels a little warped, logic-wise, but I can't pinpoint where. The Kinrath poison, though, is what I'm really worried about. How are you going to take her through the rest of the game with frail hands and skin, especially when you made her a Guardian? It just doesn't compute... And if you would consider clarifying something for me? Is Cortessa Dark or Light? Well, farewell, and Happy Writing! |
| Queenofinsanity 2006-07-01 ch 32, | abusegah! her hands! How will she fight?! |
| Noelle 2006-06-27 ch 32, anon. | abuseGah! tension, your stories will be the death of me! 0.o Your writing is so damn good, it just draws me in their so right now I'm feeling exactly what the characters are feeling and its DEPRESSING! You truly are to gifted! I miss the good ol days when the depressing stuff wasn't quite so depressing cuz their was humor! You make me cry! but I'm addicted! I feel like a druggie, or like I'm in an abusive relationship! T.T |
| TrueWinolo 2006-06-25 ch 32, | abuseGreat story, but I just wanted to know if you would pair Canderous (if he comes back) with Bastilla or Juhani? Please update as soon as you have the time to! |
| Yumi's Jade Katana 2006-06-24 ch 32, | abuseyay nice job! ^^ I'm kind of confused in some parts, though...but I still like it and I'll figure it out, good job! Update super soon! ~*((JADE))*~ |