hahahahahaha, oh man I love this, espically Bonnie playing as Cindy, and Dr. Ds. heart growing one size and a half,they were all wondering why they rhymed, great story, poem, faves

great shot, i enjoyed it, excellent work

I feel warm & toasty after reading this on a sunny spring day. I fav, I fav!

I just wanted to say a quick word - and I will keep it quick, I promise. The skill that has gone into crafting this is just pheonominal. Making all the rhymes and cadence work out the way they do, this is a genuine work of art. How long does it take to write out something like this? You can appreciate that people used to devote their lives to creating poetry, back in the day. Doesn't need to be overanalyzed, just appreciated. Good job.

OMG... this is totally priceless!

definitely the BEST CHRISTMAS STORY EVAH!

even tho I can't rhyme to save my life...

:D

you SO ROCK!

Very cute! I like it.

It doesn't take a nursery rhyme to tell you that this fic was awesome. But I'll do it anyway

The Christmas spirit is still good as gold
As good as the above fic that was told
Now at this lovely fic that I read
Maybe sugarplums may be dancing in my head
And if it is, I'll get my head checked
The only thing this fic should get is respect
Now I must flee, it will be my honor
To wish you all a happy, safe, Kwanzaa

Just kidding.

Well done

S-Chrome.

Wow. How long did it take you to write this? This was hilarious, and you found a way to incorporate all of the major characters! Kudos to you! The re-ccuring "are we rhyming?" thing was especially enjoyable. :)

LOL! You had the characters asking why they were speaking in rhyme at least 4 or 5 times.
Now I am going to speak in rhymes.
I think it was a really cute and nice one - shot.
I'm probably going to read this a lot.
I can't wait for other stories by you.
With Kim, Ron, Rufus, Shego, Drakken, and mabye Will Du.
So I bid you good day,
But I have one last thing to say.
So have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
And continue to be filled with great cheer.

THE END.

It's quite true that your poem is funny.
Tis a real shame it can make no money.
I laughed out loud.
You should be proud!
Drakken and Shego were simply outrageous.
Oh no, rhyming's contagious!

But all goo reviews should say good and bad,
So one more thing I simply must add.
'Notches' could be matched with a nicer rhyme,
so I can read this to the kids at bedtime.

I recommend:
"Shook his fist at the town, “Santa’s comin’, You watchez!”"
(It is not perfect, this I do know,
but it is much better than when my wife's hands are aglow!)

Payton: This is clever! Why,you must have spent quite some time--
Mrs. Dolotta: Trying to get all those phrases to rhyme.
Payton: I cracked up laughing in parts of the story!
Mrs. Dolotta: You sure gave that old fashioned poem some glory.
Payton: Good work on that tale, I say Kudos to you.
Mrs. Dolotta: But now we must leave so I bid you, Adieu.

Dude, this thing is awesome! How long did it take you to come up with all of those rymes? And one more thing, is Ron
really Jewish? Does it say that in the show somewhere?

I find it amusing the amount of people who are leaving you reviews that rhyme. I would, ah, do the same, but I rather like to think you respect my intellect (for someone of 16, anyway), and I'd rather like to continue you to think that. If I were to even attempt a rhyme, it would abolish all thoughts of me being in any way intelligent.

But, as I said at dA - this story kicks **. You rock, man.

:)

This story is just another addition to the evidence that proves that YOU ROCK!

This story is full of humor and christmas spirit that really "hits the spot" for this joyfull season. The whole thing is seamless, thought-out, and simply funny. I have no idea how you could make every two lines rhyme, and have the rhymes make sense and add a dash or two of humor to the fanfic. It even got me in a rhyme-ing frame of mind for at least an hour! so I have a small poem to give to you that is a small result of your efforts:

your fiction is outstanding, all through and through

But I want your next story, so no rest for you!

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays,

But do try to hurry with your next fiction craze! (LOL)

G_Go I loved that story what a great idea. Very touching too. I think it was great how you played it out. That story was awesome! It rocked my friend. *hugs* Merry Christmas! And happy holidays!!
Cheers,
Lydia