the ending was hilarious! he he he!!
the starting was sadish and was funny at the same time.

Sweet. Completely sweet. Perfect.

Is there gonna be more? I hope so, this stoy's getting cute.

I love it, especially the ending.

aw. this was so sweet, reall sweet...I liked it *puts on favs*

Aw!
That was sweet and cute and loving and... well you get the point, right?
Nice one shot, I hope I'll read more from you soon.

Wow. That's excellent. It sounds very very very very much as if it could have been a scene from the anime or manga! Great characterization.