o i like it! update soon

Hmm... that was pretty good.

Maybe a little short, but I'd like to see where this story goes.

Your English was just fine, by the way

Update ASAP.

Karilee Kamicat

This is great, sweetheart! Can't wait for the next instalment! Loving the descriptions in your story! And your English is very good!

please hurry it's a great start