Spectacularly written. The issue of Chase and his father was really good and you said all the right things. I can never get enough of you and your beautiful talent for writing an angsty Chase.

So House does have a soul! It's nice to see that he cares, no matter how little, about Chase and that he knows when to stop the heartless bastard act and actually be a person. Nice story.

aw! this is such a cute fanfic! I loved it.

This rang as rather out of character to me, at least for House. It may be the canon talking, but even before 'One Day, One Room', it's apparent that SOMEONE abused House and given his actions and words about his father during 'Daddy's Boy', that certainly alluded to John having done so. House has never said he hates anyone, not even Darth Vogler or **, but he hates his father? And House isn't the sort of person to assign deep emotions to anything if he can help it. John certainly doesn't strike me (or anyone else I've talked to about the subject) as the sort of person who would willingly tell their child they loved them. He might have done so during House's infarction and House was dying at the time.

*sighs* This isn't a bad story at all. I think that if Chase doesn't know any details of House's life, he might imagine these things. However, you did say that Chase was on a balcony far away from where House and his parents were standing. It's possible that what John said was distorted as it carried to Chase's ears and he filled the blanks in with what he wanted to hear. That, to me, sounds a lot more plausible than John ever telling House to his face that he loves him.

OMG, that has to have been the cutest fic i've ever read about House and Chase, in a father/son kinda relationship. You should maybe do more along this story line.

FINALLY! Someone writes Chase as a person instead of a wet cardboard cutout.

Gorgeously beautiful. I want to give Chase a big hug... and maybe insult him as well.. since I like Wilson's idea of apologizing to Chase by means of having sex with him. Lolz.

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Good work. A few grammatical errors (nothing a beta couldn't catch), but overall, a good plotline and respectful to their characters. :)

I finally got around to reading this..So sad! I love a hurting!Chase

terrific story you've got. you always have good ones.

i love your portrayal of chase in this one, it just feels right. and he and house having their little confrontations/conversations...that was good. i think you've got a good idea of who these guys are in themselves and their relation to each other.

keep it up. you do well.

Wonderful! I've been looking for some quality Chase-centric House fic and boy did you deliver. I felt you had everyone very well characterised with the added bonus of a compelling plot. I hope to see more!

do a followup or something--this is cute!

"It was wrong, but deliciously wrong, like eating chocolate before supper or going down on a married woman."

Okay, I ADORE this line. Not only for the obvious reasons (although those are definitely appealing), but because Chase has always seemed to embody this really intriguing mix of innocence and debauchery, and you've managed to capture that beautifully. The rest of the story is wonderful, too...particularly Chase's reaction to House and his father...but that one line just...wow.

Cheers! T.

That was lovely. The characterizations were just right even in the moments when House and Chase were softer than usual it didn't seem awkward at all.

I haven't actually seen the episode where House's parents visit but I can see Chase reacting that way. And the father issues...maybe it's just too obvious that people think it's not interesting but Chase really is (or was) looking for a father figure and I think you've captured that superbly. Thanks for sharing.

This is a really spectacular story- I've enjoyed reading all your House fics. Not many people like to write Chase, and you do it with incredible skill. Please continue writing, for all your stories, and I'd love to even see a sequel to this.
Sincerely, Joanna