You made me cry! Not everyone can make me cry like i did. Poor little Intoshi

WRITE MORE!

i thought it was good but i think you killed inuyasha and kagome to fast.

...will that sucks (i mean Naraku rule the world your story rocked!)

Story wasn't bad. however in my opinion you killed Inuyasha and Kagome too easily. The Ending was ciché but it was a good story none the less.

side note: wouldn't Intoshi be able to use the Tetsaiga and also have spirtual power due to inheritance from his parents?

anyway just a thought i had when he came out and told naraku to leave inu alone. Please dont regard this as a Flame it wasnt intended as one.

oh...so dark but so good. good job.

NO! THAT CAN'T BE *sniff* i'll miss them. i almost cried. great storyline tho, but still i'll miss them

uh, ok?

why did inuyasha and kagome die so easily?

i mean they're both pretty powerful, and you took them both down in 4 sentances. lol.

but, if you see them like that...

and why would naraku come back after so long?

like...okay

nice. it was sad but not crying sad. I wrote something like this but with nothing happy to do with it. it's called the beauty of a knife. if you like this kind of story i would suggest reading it. next time add a little more detail to the tourcher if you really want to make them cry. and personaly i don't think this is as much a horor as it is an angstity so you might want to change that. anyway it was good. keep writing and see you again sometime.

Soma X

GOOD (CRY'S) VERY GOOD

i liked it but...whyed you kill inuyasha and kagome i didn't cry but i'm sorry to say that part sucked.please don't get mad at me for saying that. :(

[cring]thats good but bring his p...never mind. it was great.

hey this didn't make me cry? why? i loved it though you should have like the son killing or better yet torchuring Naraku.haha

thays sad i started to cry when inuyasha said kagome...intoshi i love you both. :(