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E.E.Kelley
2009-04-03 . chapter 12
All in all, I'm beyond pleased with the conclusion of this! I really enjoyed the final extra chapter. I smiled the entire time I was reading it ^_^ There was nothing that I felt it was lacking, and wouldn't have changed anything!

Keep up the good work, as always!
E.E.Kelley
2009-04-03 . chapter 10
I'm absolutely in LOVE with Dean and Richard! Well, in love with this entire story, but those two really blossomed!

I can't wait to read more. I've still got my fingers crossed, hoping that Willow and Giles will come into the story itself -- meeting Vamp!Xander at some point. Well, here's for hoping and I've still got a bit to go!

Keep up the good work! I'm always impressed with your stories.
dmalfoy
2006-12-21 . chapter 12
Very different from anything I've read before. Excellent though!
dmalfoy
2006-12-21 . chapter 12
Very different from anything I've read before. Excellent though!
dmalfoy
2006-12-21 . chapter 12
Very different from anything I've read before. Excellent though!
Saeadame
2005-12-31 . chapter 11
YAY! long chap ^^

I just got around to reading it.

Awe, yay Rich & co are doing better and better.

and woot, Xan & Spike are on a mission *dances*

Sorry this review isn't longer, but I'm being kicked off the computer

Update soon!
Saeadame
2005-12-13 . chapter 10
Aww! I just have to make a reply to your reply to my review:

*bashes self over head* OMG I'm soo sorry I made you think I didn't enjoy the story! So not true! I love it! All my comments are really just little reading things!

Another great chap!

~Saeadame
Saeadame
2005-12-12 . chapter 9
OMG! poor Richard T_T

... on the other hand he now has a good lover ^_^

oo! Are Spike and Xander gonna learn to speak their language? 'cause that would be cool!

Great three chapters! There was just that one "nod nod wink wink" thing that was similar to the sniffling thing, but great job!

Aw! So cute. Anyways, awaiting the next chap!

~Saeadame
Saeadame
2005-12-11 . chapter 6
Aw!

Well, other then a few issues in the beginning (the bits where Willow would be sniffling in the middle of talking made the message a little difficult to understand. I mean, I got it, but maybe next time put the sniffling thing at the beginning or the end and sort of referance to the fact that she's sniffling the whole time or something.

And I guess you were trying to shorten the explianation bit by making it kind of stuttered, but you probably could have just said that he explained the situation and then have little snitches of him patiently explaining that yes, he's still the same, etc.

But those are just some little things, the story itself is great! And poor Giles! I hope he gets better/doesn't die T_T. That would make me sad. *sighs* mild Threesome *grins* XD

Awaiting next chapter at the edge of my uncomfortable computer chair!

~Saeadame
Saeadame
2005-12-08 . chapter 5
aww! soo cute! And I really can't wait for the next chappie when they acctually talk to the watcher-people. Great chapter, as usual.

~Saeadame
Saeadame
2005-12-04 . chapter 4
woot. Another cute chappie.

I don't really know where you're going with "Richard" but I like him. He's nice to the Xan-Spike team ^^

Anyway, I know something'll come up to make me go "no!! things were going so well T_T" but until that day comes, I can enjoy the happiness spread around ^^.

o are they gonna meet up w/ the Watcher people at some point?

lol. I looked up your LJ - ~.^ I'll be adding these chaps to my memories as they come

Great job with the Rich-ish POV. Anywho. Cute chap, can't wait for more ^^

~Saeadame
wild wolf free17
2005-12-04 . chapter 4
Very good.
Saeadame
2005-11-30 . chapter 3
aw! cute!

lol, well things are looking up for poor Spike & Xan, but can't you just tell that they're going to get worse again before they get all better?

... if they even do get all better XD

awesome, awesome story!

~Saeadame
Saeadame
2005-11-28 . chapter 2
wa... good fic

update soon!
wild wolf free17
2005-11-27 . chapter 1
interesting.
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