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| the little voice in your he... 2006-08-19 ch 1, | abusequestion. where you high when you wrote this story? |
| Yamatosamuri 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseErr.. Well.. Thats what the game said, but you do have a point with the metals one. In the game, the golf ball explodes and the ppl can wear disguises. -.-; |
| KingofAzeroth65 2005-11-27 ch 1, | abuseI hate to be a critic, but your story shows some inexperience. I have alot of the Army Men Video Games, and I have a few questions: If the Colonel was plastic, how could he only sometimes wear medals? Also, how could the Greens wear Tan disguises if they're plastic? And how could a golfball blow up the Greens? It might crush a few, but in my experience, golfballs don't explode. Other than that, I enjoyed it. Keep writing. |