Wow!
I loved it! Xx

cute ^^

aww, it was a lovely, sweet fic ! keep on writing ! :D

That was horrible so stop writing things like this. If you want it to be better put some actual sex in there! :(

It's not the most breathtaking fic ever, but it was enjoyable and in character for the most part.

Nice. Though I shudder if it were any of the three other than Luffy, especially any of the three!

short but sweet...^^

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Good job!!
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It's cute! ^_^ I love this kind of stories, he he.

cute story, nd i new hu u were from da one piece obsession. WEG told me. nd dat u wrote one piece fics.

Aw! Sweet! I don't see Luffy as the poetic type but it was still really cute! :)

it was so cute i really loved it it was kind a short but it's so sweet. (like cute sweet, not awsom sweet)

anyways i am looking forward for other stories you made, but i will give you a while to write another one, or i can just find the ones you wrote already. but keep up the good work.

Great fic!

love it

Aw.
That made me feel weird.
Like a tingle in my body.
Hehe, it's really cute, probably the best one-shot I've read. You've packed so much emotion into a few words. :)