Great story! Love it!

Yay. *actually *does* suck at feedback*

But I really liked it. You write angsty!Arty really well, and deal with morality magnificently.

I'll remind you of my fave lines:

"Artemis deliberately released the fistful of drapery in his hand, stretching out fingers as pale and unstained as they had been that morning. It wasn’t the literal spots of blood that had bothered Lady Macbeth, either."

Lovely. Even if I was - supposedly - the only one who got it.

"He had learned to command Butler almost before he had learned to use his own arms and legs. Whether the finger on the trigger had been Butler’s or his own was as irrelevant as whether it had been his left hand or his right"

Just wonderful. Light and fluffy, yet hard-hitting. [/random oxymoron.]

*claps*

This was pretty angsty. Do you think Artemis gets guilt issues about the other stuff he's had Butler do? like the fights he has him start or the threats he makes on his behalf, or is it just a mortalitiy thing? anyway good story.

Ooh... good. It seems a tiny bit weird to me that Timmy could go on living normally after someone tried to kill him that same day, but hey, I guess it's possible. I liked how you contrasted the carelessness of his parents to Artemis' grave thinking. Very good. I really don't have any complaints.

*loves it*

*spies another Acorn gleaming in the distance*

Omuhgosh, Arty killed someone!

*can't say anything more comprehensible than that because FH was up late reading last night* *and is currently listening to a Draco and the Malfoys song*

*supports the Orion Awards*

~Scatterbrained!FH

This is good, one of the best I read in a long while for 'Artemis Fowl'...well in all actuality, 'the' best. I love your work, your poetic fluency is so good, I feel like I'm in the room with him. Would it be too corny to say thankyou for writing this?

-Irathernotsay

Another great story, though I find it a little difficult to imagine Artemis feeling such remorse. Neverhteless, it's readable and interesting, and you've done agood job. Well done!

Wow. WowWowWow. I am so privelidged to be the first to review this- its AMAZING! You are SUCH a good writer- keep it comiong! Your other story, the one with Pandora's Box, is my fav ever fanfic, by the way.