It was pretty nice.

This is just responding to some of the reviews.


Kyuubi: Its not my best. It was a "spur of the moment" idea that I created for a C2...which I think has disappeared. But the story remains.

Tylec: Is there some other phrase for my heart flutters?
"My heart beats so many times in one second; its hard to believe I'm falling for him so hard."

Yeah...thats all I can think of.

Darn, I wanted to be burned at the stake...Oh, well, I'll save that for another time.

-Coughs- ANYWAY, awesomenes. I like how you arranged Zakuro's thoughts in here.

FLUFFINESS RULES THE WORLD! MUAHAHHAHAHAHA! YEAH!

Kawaii! Zakuro X Keiichiro 4EVA! We REALLY need more ZxK fics. Since the Zakuro X Pie fics are polluting the place...

Not too bad. Admittedly, you have a long way to go if this is your best effort. I'll venture to say that the personalities, for the most part, seemed accurate, but you were severely lacking in detail. Flow could be improved, as well. I think that the idea was good and that the characters were besically kept in line, but the execution of your idea was elusive, ne? ^^

that was adorable! ZakuroXKeiichiro 4eva!

beatiful!

Cute

Great. That was a great one-shot ^-^ Though.. I didn't think that Keiichi and Zakuro would make a pairing.. but it's your one-shot so yeah. Great job though.

"when I know he’s here, my heart flutters" The fluttery heart image is a bit overused by authors today. I'd look to something original for later stories.

It was good to get all those interior thoughts Zakuro keeps to herself, and there's a good build-up to her climactic confession but gosh, the romance in this story was too easy.

OK... That was... unusual. I never thought Kechiiro and Zakuro would work together. I put Zakuro & Pai together in my head. :D

AW! Its so cute and flufy. I lurved it:)

Great one-shot!