Aw, that's so sweet! I haven't read a Marufuji brothers story like this before and I have to say, it's very original and really captures the bond between Ryo and Sho. Honestly, I can't believe I've never even thought of their relationship like this before. All older siblings, to their younger siblings, are like idols, especially if they're the same gender. (I should know, I'm an older sister myself.) Your story: an A work.

That was kinda depressing, but good. My question is why is a yu-gi-oh! gx story in yu-gi-oh! stuff? Oh well, not important xD. Anyway, really good story. Yes . . .

that was really well-written, though i admit that the thing about their father...it made me feel like crying, okay? i don't like it when ryo's hurt...still, this was really good.

Continue. Please? I like their brotherly relationship so much but there seems to be just a few fics about them around... I just wish people would drop the Judai-Asuka/Jaden-Alexis thing and move to the Marufuji/Truesdale brothers! (Faves.)

I liked this alot. I thought it was wonderfully done and that it protrayed the Truesdale(Marufuji) brother relationship beautifully. It is a lot like normal brothers have...or brother and sister...depending. *smiles* Brings back memories.

TEAR GERKER! LOVE IT! WRITE MORE!

Wow! That was really good! Is it one shot?

This was suprisingly well written; very simple, very forward, and lacked vagueness. It was also detached enough that it allowed the reader to see the emotions on the outside, but not detached as that we feel nothing for the character. Well written indeed. Goo job.

That. Was. AWESOME! I absolutely love how you caught not only Shou's emotions to his brother, but Ryou's to near the end. Great job.

I loved it. It was great. that was one of my favorite stories. hope you write more.

This was awesome! I love it so much! Keep writing like this!

Wai! Wonderful introspective! Loved the subtle hints about the past. Nice with keeping the angst in check.

Dear K*Star,

I liked this story alot.

Signed,

Vulpix10

Wow. This story was AMAZING! I love it! Throughout the entire thing I was totally...enthralled.

You describe their relationship SO well...I can't even begin to mention the details.

Good spacing, grammer, spelling... such feeling in the sentences! Kawaii!

I also liked how you described Ryo's eyes so perfectly, along with everything else.

I truely don't know exactly what to say except: OMG *squeal* I LOVE IT! *loses her composure*

lol. Wonderful job. Keep writing!

Awr. X3

Ain't it the truth? That's probably how they were, too, before Shou turned shy and clingy after that little incident with Power Bond. X3