A well-written story! I am enthralled:)
Please update soon

what a beautiful story. I'm totally into halo, so i know what i'm talking about when i say that this really made me imagine that IM the big alien screwing with Sonya. Way to effing go!

This story is fantastic, I love the interactions between the characters, they're very realistic. I look forward to the next chapter, happy writing!

haha uhh...its a little past may 30th infact its september 23rd

WOW! amazing super awsome, PLEASE UPDATE! and i 4 some reason imagand them on their own planet or islnad, NOT a suggestion, just sharing imagery

wow, really cool concept.

Wow, this is an amazing and original story! I just beat Halo 2 and I was so excited to see this story. I really do hope you update soon with these long chapters. I really got into this story and was very disappointed to see it end! Please update soon and continue your amazing writing style. I can’t wait to see them plunge into their relationship deeper! I hope you continue with this story. =]
~Coley

Eh, not to sound like I'm rushing you or anything, but the little note-thing at the end says May 30th. It bothers me when words written aren't right. :P Anyways, I do love this story. It rocks. The writing is great, the editing (or lack of noticeable mistakes)is great.

The longer chapters are a huge plus. I like having to sit and read for more than ten minutes to finish a chapter. It helps to keep me interested.

By the by, is there a new estimate of when the next chapter is going to be out? If not, it's fine, I just like knowing when I can expect something new to read. :)

Really good so far!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon!!

This story is great PLEASE Update soon am looking forward to reading next chapter

Haha, mate to a monkey very funny :). I do however have but one very simple request.

UPDATE THE FREAKIN THING YOU LAZY PERSON!

now that I have that off my chest I would just like to say that the story is very good, arby rules, and keep up the good work.

:)

uh your late. very late. but i like the story either way. its funny how they cant help but give in to the primal thoughts.

nice story =]
great plot and the angst freakin shows
plus abrys my fav halo character
please update soon!...

Nice plot. You did a good job with the feelings and stuff. Arby is the most freakin awesome halo character anyway.

Sorry, random; it's just how i am xp

Sorry to bother you but I just have one little nitpick. When Sonya said the word Sangheili the Abiter really shouldn't have been offended because the sangheili language is main language of the covenant. So he really should be used to accents considering that some species like the kig-yar (jackals) are unable to form proper sounding words due to their beaklike mouths. So that whole scene didn't really make sense because it is also known that the Sangheili are offended by the name Elite. They put huge emphasis on names.