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john 2008-02-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseplease continue the story, it is interesting to see somthing like this, Ive never seen a story like this before and Id love to finish reading it.
Seriously Yours 2008-02-04 ch 2,	abuseVery realistic capture of emotions and behaviour. Just beware of the pitfalls of this type of senario...mainly the Stockholm syndrom. ie: falling in love with captor/enemy/person you loathe without sufficient reason or circumstance. Cheers! Eagerly awaiting next chapter. :)
Seriously Yours 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseThat was excellent. You're a very talented writer.
DeGlace 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseI've gotta give you kudos for several reasons; one: you actually wrote (or began to write) an elite x human fic which is a) coherent b) plot-ilicious and c) better than any Halo fic I've read so far, two: you've actually made me review a fic that's completely out of my fandom, three: you made me bother to log into my account to do so (something I haven't done in years, mostly because I'm scared my readers will eat me for disappearing) This fic was last updated in '05 so I'm obviously not going to operate under the delusion that you might be plotting an update within the next few months. However I'm thinking that perhaps a nice review might get your creative juices flowing re: this fic... maybe! If your userpage is up to date and you are actually 16 as we speak, I see big things for you - your writing/grasp of grammar/sense of the importance of plot seemed to signal to ME a far older and more experienced writer, so BIG POINTS to you for your excellent writing. To further enhance this review's utter lack of organization I'm going to say - no, scream - that I'm happy I'm not the only one who finds elites 'interesting' (by that I mean SEXY!) & more than just bullet-fodder. Hooves, yum. In conclusion - this would have been longer if I didn't have a bus to catch - I'll be watching you young lady :) I'm hoping you'll find the time to update this, though if you don't I sure can't blame you (having not updated my own fics in two years). A
Lyneia 2007-12-08 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is a great story and a truly intriguing concept!! I really hope you add more chapters to this story soon. Please!!
Alpha Huntress 2007-10-31 ch 2,	abuseHey, um I don't know what you are planning for this but this story is interesting. I hope to see updates for this story.
Vampirika 2007-10-02 ch 2,	abuseWhen will you put out the next chapter?
Vampirika 2007-10-02 ch 1,	abuseyes! it's awesome, please continue. I've been looking for a good fic about Arbiter, and this one rocks!
Nikki Hatake 2007-09-30 ch 2,	abusei hope you update soon i really like the story
Mina 2007-09-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseI agree w/everyone else, this is a GREAT story, you dont see many of these on the site...you have an amazing writing style, and I know this story has great potential, and I can tell that w/just two chapters! I do hope you continue this story, im sure everyone would love that! Thanks :P
OnyxRose88 2007-05-31 ch 1,	abuseThis story is the best Halo romance on this site!No joke,no questions asked.You have the potential for a really great story here and I mean seriously everyone in their right mind LOVES a forbidden romance! An exiled covi arbiter is forced to marry a rebellious tough military girl,the making of a perfect story.And your writing style is perfect for this type of story!Please update.
Nyhtmare 2007-04-28 ch 2,	abuseO.O . . . . Where's the rest?! You have to continue! Please! Hardly anybody writes these kinds of stories and (as I said before) you are one of the best! If you don't want to listen to fans' cries then fine. Just know that your letting incredible talent go to waste. I say it one ore time: please continue your story.
Nyhtmare 2007-04-28 ch 1,	abuseHOLY CRAP! YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS EVER! Finally, another ElitexHuman fic! IT IS PERFECT! You need to- have to -update this story!
Tim101 2007-04-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseWell this story has been GREAT so far but are you planing on updating anytime soon. you should this story has alot of potentail
Azmaria 2007-01-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseUpdate! A year is way too long to wait!

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