o.0 ok...was dat yuri? or... never mind...

that was interesting... strange... but interesting non the less...
make a part 2 please!

A sequel? please? pretty please? And I'm BEGGING you, don't pop Kakashi's eye out!!

Woot!

Tis the "Abi..." reveiwer.

Yes, this is definantly one of my favorite stories. :]

GREAT FRIGGIN JOB!

I love you and want to have your babies! -cough-and get rich off their hot bisounen writing skilzz-cough-

okay, the whole interaction between itachi and kakashi was totally in character. it was very s and m-ey, which is very much tsukiyomi style. fire was incorporated perfectly into the story, and one cannot forget the slight ita/obi sprinkling!

... long story short...
*twiddles fingers* I liked your one-shot.

I swear to God this is the best story I've read since, "The Darkness is Killing Me" by alicia14 on

loved it *_* YAY for madness!

This is fantastic, really. I mean, it's demented in a good, mind**y-sort-of way.

Of course, I think Kakashi is and always will be more crazy than Itachi- I'm a Kakashi fangirl; I can't help it.

This would be on my favorites list, except my list is already full.

I didn't review this one either...? *gasp*

Well, this one has always stuck in my mind. It kinda..swirls in there, mixing with the dregs of life.

...What...?


Anyways, Kakashi is awesome. MY throat hurts. Bye. XD

COOL! I WISH I COULD READ MORE OF THE STORY, BUT I CAN ONLY READ THE FIRST ONE. I WONDER IF YOU HAVE WRITTEN MORE TO THE STORY THE NEXT TIME I READ IT AGAIN. PLEASE DO, FOR I LOVE THE START OF THIS.

LINDSAY

Again, powerful, intriguing, alarming, yet exciting-in a twisted kind of way. Your stories are artfully dark, beautiful in its choice of words. You're in my fav author list. Write more.

hm this is good...are you going to do anymore chapters or a sequel maybe? at anyrate i think this is a good oneshot. well done.^-^

Oh So creepy! Wow! I really enjoyed it. The detail of Itachi's laquered fingernail captured the horror of the moment for me somehow. Can't really explain it, but it was a perfect little touch.

I'm very fond of this story. Loved the idea behind it and loved the dialogue.

good fic :)