 Akami-lee 2006-10-15 . chapter 1aw, that's cute. ^.^ |
 AShauni21 2006-01-04 . chapter 1That was just too cute...I feel sorry for the poor village they were in. |
 That Girl CJ 2005-12-17 . chapter 1cute... |
 Shiroi Anko 2005-11-28 . chapter 1hee hee very funny and I like your exaggerated choice of words. You are doing very well |
 ice illuser 2005-11-26 . chapter 1oh...awesome story, i love it when goku and lirin get together... |