You should have kept going, dude! This was cool! :D

Great story. Are you planning on finishing it? If not, would you mind if I made a sequel to it.

Shino...

He was really in character. For, like, maybe one of the first times in fanfiction when he's in a situation like this.

This story made me very sad. Good job :D

How sad and very well written.

That was really interesting and strong. It's a nice change to see Shino on center stage, and Hinata's hesitation. Really nice characterization.

Gorgeous...

It's okay to add this to my C2, right?

So sad but good!

Loved it.
Nobody writes Shino well. This was brilliant.

Ah, beautiful. Another nice fic.

thank you for refreshening my day. Nice one. By the time I was finished, I was whooah. this is heavy. It was a short narrative, how subtle, however oozing with all that feelings... I like this. You have a writer's hand. You made me click the go button beside the sumbit review link. I seldom do that.

Keep writing.