Good story! Thanks for sharing! ^-^

very nice, though i u elaborated more at the end. but it's a very well job done overall^^

wow, I like it and it didn't make me cry. I knew it was the hormoans.

sad and then happy

::sobs:: That was so sad. I really liked the ending though. Loved the song. I'm a major MCR fan. It's good. You should keep writing.

the moment i saw this i was playing the song. how crazy is that?!! anyways i really liked this in a sad kind of way.great combo with the song and the storyline. i like it. good job.