Aw! So sad, but such a very plausible ending! I always found it a little weird that Ash always managed to save the day, no matter how many times he did die/almost died... XD Rock on! U

this is a much better ending.

sad. 10/10

'Ash felt his Poke Balls shaking'

*Giggle*

well,ash died,so...i'm happy...

this is a really a good story. Better onr than i could of wrote

Keshia your BFF LYLAS

Wow, short and sweet. Usually I dont care for short fics but this is a definant exception. You gave me a very accurate and interesting outlook on how things would have gone if Ash HADNT saved the world and failed. Very nice story and good job.