|Reviews for The Chosen One|
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 6/11/10 . chapter 1
Aw! So sad, but such a very plausible ending! I always found it a little weird that Ash always managed to save the day, no matter how many times he did die/almost died... XD Rock on! U
| lopenash 4/24/10 . chapter 1
this is a much better ending.
| Teraunce 12/4/08 . chapter 1
| DarkDeSkull 6/11/07 . chapter 1
'Ash felt his Poke Balls shaking'
| SEG-CISR 11/25/05 . chapter 1
well,ash died,so...i'm happy...
| keshia 11/25/05 . chapter 1
this is a really a good story. Better onr than i could of wrote
Keshia your BFF LYLAS
| DragoKnight 11/25/05 . chapter 1
Wow, short and sweet. Usually I dont care for short fics but this is a definant exception. You gave me a very accurate and interesting outlook on how things would have gone if Ash HADNT saved the world and failed. Very nice story and good job.