Lovely story. I hate to say it, but I love stories where people notice that the boys have more injuries than they should. It would be nice if severe abuse cases never got over looked, but unfortunately they do. However, I also don't like it when people make assumptions about families without knowing the facts. I think if the boys demonstrated some of their fighting skills, some of their older injuries could be easily explained away by sparring exercises getting out of hand. That works for some variety from the old "sports injury" line.

Read it. Loved it!

"What kind of father checks the hospital before his sons' friends' houses?" Sam looked skeptical; His brother would be proud.
"I don't know; I'm only ten years old. you're the doctor, you tell me. Where's my brother?"
LOL! You tell her, Sammy!

>Dean felt Sam tense up and instinctively stepped in front of him, turning to face his brother's tormentor. "Who the Hell are you?"<
And the battle line has been drawn! This is one line you don't want to cross Dr.

>John spent the night there, protecting his son from whatever haunted his dreams.<
Oh,no! You're putting cracks in my 'Hate John To The Depths Of My Soul' resolution!

Great story. Thank You.

Cat

Aw that was so sweet! I loved seeing how they each looed out for each other!
Loved it! *adds to favs*
Dit aka Ditzyleo

hi, loved this story. Really didn't like the socal worker, couldn't she see from the start that they are ment to be together?? Happy she finally got a clue! Loved the caring John, so different from what I see in all the other stories.
THanks heaps!
Happy Easter

Aw, I love it!
Awesome job!!
-claire

That's right, bitch! You stay away!

God damn social worker!

Aw that was so sweet. I hardly ever read gen fics but i love this one.

Nice little slice of life. Poor kids, and poor John, doing the best anybody knows how and hopeing and praying it's enough.

Good! I liked.

That was great. I really loved it. The characterization and the plot were awesome!

Oh my god... I love these stories! Hospitals and doctors or nurses or whatever growing suspicious... You'd think that would happen more often in the actual TV series. I wanna see an episode that delves into that!

Great first chapter. I thought it was a oneshot when I first started reading it, and when I got close to the bottom, I was freaking out because it didn't look like you were going to finish it in time... But then I saw it had another chapter, and I was like, YEAH!

Great job!

Great fic!

That was great. Loved it. Great story.

Yeah, this story is almost a year old but I loved it anyways. Nice work!