Well written. I'd never thought of that line from Snape's POV...

Keep Writing!

Yeah...that line...

*nods head* I remember that scene. And I have to say what GIVES? Since according to the book Barty is supposed to be in his early 30s?! And yet he looks like he's in his 20s! I still think the director chose the wrong actor!

yum! yum!

Pretty good for something so short.

Love it... short, but great. Fantastic last line. Wow, you made my stomach turn ever so slightly in one hundred words!

Creepy! :-D Well done, Jamie! Hardly drabble!

Hey, I really like this...
I didn't think this was what it would be like at all, but yeah, in the movie, I definitelly thought eh was talking to Snape.

Oohh... good creepiness! I wholly approve. You know, I actually thought he WAS talking to Snape first, and then Dumbledore held out Harry's arm, and I was like, "Oh..." Good job with this - I can see Snape really feeling this.

Hey, hey- that's good! Oh...and when you said it was 100 words, I expected a lot worse. No, that was brilliant!