Cute

great story

T_T You havent updated in forever!! you havent given up on this story have you?!! I love it! It's original and the story line is so good!! Please finish it!! PLEASE!!

HaHa! that thing at the end of chapter 2 was hilarious! =P lol So funny! It was so simple... like a typical something youd see on a cartoon instead of an anime... but it was adorable tho, and so cute! kinda reminded me of Rodger Rabbit for some reason.. lol. Kudos! ^_^ really funny!

Please! You need to finsh this story!! I will DIE if you don't!
Ok i'm over reacting but you need to update!

whats goiung to happion tell me great stury thoue love it

i like it. ^.^

good...I forget my critique(sp) but sometimes words r missing...check for that kay? oh and if that TyKa preview is suppose to have a black scarf with a read phenoix(sp) on it...Tyson made a grey one...not black

love the story!update soon!

YAY UPDATE really liked the chapter pretty cool and well pairing I dunno plz update soon.

we know that Tala wont be able to keep his hands to himself, Tyson too hot

Tke: *grabs mike* please let me be the 100th, please let me be the 100th...
Kei: you are a MORON.
Tke: *smacks him out of the way* i know i don't need to review, usally i'm telling you what i think at school, but... BEING 100 ROCKS! XP
Kei: you're... insane...
Tke: get back to typing!
Kei: *glares but goes back to retyping MLMH26*
Tke: good boy.
Kei: *growl*
Tke: as i always say at school, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

Love always XD
Tke

P.S. Note from Kei: WE SHOULD MAKE AN ARMY AND KILL WHO REPORTED YOU!

let's just say this is very very interesting and funny...
and wish that they would get to beating tala and michael's ** already...ja ne!

oh my god this story is so very great i cant ebilive i haven't found it since now plz update it

Akira: Yay! A update! *does a little dance*

Mimi: ^^ aww cute tyka fluff.

May: Not enough blood.

Akira: & Mimi: O.o

Akira: May I think you've got a problem.

May: We've already established this.

Akira: Yes, but I think you've -really- got a problem.

May: *smirking* And you don't?

Akira: At least mine's less destructive and disturbing than yours.