Aw! Cute.
I saw the ending a mile away though...
But still.
Cute.

*sniff* oh the fluff. *sigh* hehe

So cute~! Eh, just thought you'd like to know, but the last line, "I'm thankful you", don't you mean "I'm thankful for you"? Just wondering...>.>

Ahahah, the fact that Ed thinks that Roy would be thankful for miniskirts is just too funny!

cute fic. hughes was pretty predictable... but still amusing. armstrong's sparkles never cease to crack me up. you're missing a word... should be "I'm thankful for you."

Aw... so cute! X3 and you know Ed should have known Hughes's answer! XD CUTE!

Hey, for being rushed, this is still pretty cute. :)

;_;

is the last sentence i am thankful for you?

Squee! So cute. Putting the impact in the last line was great! There are a few grammer and spelling errors, but not many, and most are unnoticable...except for the last line ^^; You left out the word "for"

Anyway other than that it was really cute. I love that pairing, and your writing style is very unique. ^^ I look forward to your next story.

If there are any grammer mistakes, I can't find them... One word is missing though. It's in the last line "I'm thankful you."

aw! so cute!

AWW! How Kawaii!

Aww, how sweet! What did Ed expect? Or was he expecting the kiss? Because it said Ed was expecting something, but -instead- (It said instead(I rhymed!).), Roy kissed him on the forhead and said, “I’m thankful you.” Oh, cheese, I'm confuzzled! Anyways, sweet, cute, I loved it.

Yes, there were a few grammer mistakes, but not too noticible ones. For one, Hughes said, "I just -devolved- the newest set of pictures." You meant to say developed, right?

And at the end, "“What are you thankful for, Colonel?” Ed asked, already expecting the answer he predicted." Doesn't that sound weird to you? Say it aloud, okay, and tell me if there's something wrong, because don't predict and expect pretty much mean the same thing? Wouldn't it make more sense to say "Already predicting the answer"? I'm sorry, I'll shut up now. Well, bye!

I loved the story!

Aw! Kawaii (cute)! I'm sorry, I don't mean cute as in what some people happen to say when they're not too fond of a story, but it's a newbie writing or they don't want to hurt their feelings or whatever (yeah, I get those sometimes, and also write them some times) I sincerely mean that this is cute ^_^ Shounen Ai Rox my sox (I belive I said this in another review to you) oh well Love your one-shot madness (I love reading one shots ^_^)
~Ai (love)
Minako-chan ^_~ (wink)