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Reviews For: Dark Shadows Part 2

malaguku
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuseugh!... sorry but anytng about ** sora meyks me vomit!!... urgh!!.. beter go 2 d doctor now!
Flip Dictionary
2004-05-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseWorst kissing scene ever!
Heza Ishida
2000-07-06
ch 1, anon.
abuse...
Firenze
2000-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was ummm...strange. I don't even know what to say about the Tai/Sora thing. To tell the truth, it made me laugh. It was kind of pathetic, but I liked it.
Daissie
2000-05-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery cool fic, pleaz continue soon!! I'm excited to find out what happens next!
Fate Hedgehog
2000-05-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, I' slightly ballfed at much of this story (both parts) but it seems to be coming along well so far. N/A rating yet but can you have a little more clarity in your writing? No insult, but I'm having a bit difficulty following this.
Maki
2000-05-18
ch 1,
abuseOK??? Now you completely lost me, one minute in the forest looking for food....quick kiss....and then in the middle of the city?? Did I miss something?????
alphabet
2000-05-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, this all seems a little rushed. Like you don't give it time to build. But this is a promising start, and I'll look forward to more.
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