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| malaguku 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseugh!... sorry but anytng about ** sora meyks me vomit!!... urgh!!.. beter go 2 d doctor now! |
| Flip Dictionary 2004-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWorst kissing scene ever! |
| Heza Ishida 2000-07-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse... |
| Firenze 2000-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was ummm...strange. I don't even know what to say about the Tai/Sora thing. To tell the truth, it made me laugh. It was kind of pathetic, but I liked it. |
| Daissie 2000-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery cool fic, pleaz continue soon!! I'm excited to find out what happens next! |
| Fate Hedgehog 2000-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, I' slightly ballfed at much of this story (both parts) but it seems to be coming along well so far. N/A rating yet but can you have a little more clarity in your writing? No insult, but I'm having a bit difficulty following this. |
| Maki 2000-05-18 ch 1, | abuseOK??? Now you completely lost me, one minute in the forest looking for food....quick kiss....and then in the middle of the city?? Did I miss something????? |
| alphabet 2000-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, this all seems a little rushed. Like you don't give it time to build. But this is a promising start, and I'll look forward to more. |