I like how you show a human side to him. I seek to do the same with dark characters. nice one shot

wow i got to say this is really good, awsome, i always wondered a bit of how dumbledore acted when no one was around, and well this is a really interesting view, keep it up u have quite a bit of talent

i really like your portrayal of the characters, but...i dont get what happened! maybe im just tired...but when did this happen? is this guilt about the hard childhood harry had, or did the dursleys kill him or something? sorry, im just confused.

in awe... fascinating perspective

This was neat to read. Great job

This was very good, and so sad. Dumbledore has always been one of my favorite characters also.

I like how this story turned out! Keep it up!
O.G.

it was a great attempt. straight on. i think dumble was off in JK's sixth one, but it was just us getting to know him better... i suppose. i loke ur dumble. u rocks!