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Reviews For: Maid of the Sea
cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa 2007-06-16 . chapter 1
Creepy. And very well written. I applaud you.
Blue Autumn Sky 2006-05-19 . chapter 1
Oh...Barbossa being all creepy. He made even the merfolk scared. This is totally awesome, with a convincing original character and everything! Me likes
Trinity Day 2005-11-27 . chapter 1
Quite creepy, but very well written. An excellent addition to the Hallowe'en Challenge.
meowbooks 2005-11-26 . chapter 1
Brilliantly beautiful and well written. The tone, the overall feeling, the description of the action, everything seemed perfect.
jenthegypsy 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Still a chilling tale, as frightening today as when I first read it. The most disturbing line, I find, is this:

"He did not reach for his sword or his pistol, but he smiled, and that served him as well as any other weapon."

Hector was just BAD to the bone.
white raven 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Oh, that was wonderful! The imagery was so powerful, and the mermaid both beautiful and sinister - a true match for the deathless crew of the Black Pearl.
purplerebecca 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Oh, that was cool. Glad she was able to get away. :)
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