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| LemonyCrosby 2008-09-05 ch 3, | abuseToo bad it is on hiatus. It has a beautiful writing style. |
| asdfghjkl; 2007-03-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like it so far, how advanced is the new human race? have they gone to the moon yet and stuff like that? |
| DyingInnocence 2006-10-30 ch 3, | abuseI like this story. Are you gonna finish it? |
| Olaf74 2006-03-10 ch 3, | abuseIts great. please continue it soon. |
| Lord Xantam 2006-01-23 ch 3, | abusethis is amazing! |
| harper's ferry 2006-01-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is an original and well written story. I'm surprised that it doesn't have more reviews. Keep up the writing! |
| Dark-Syaoran 2006-01-06 ch 3, | abuseOriginal and I love it! Great work mate. So the book is helping this boy see the things he reads in a way? That's pretty cool. I dont think I've seen that used before. Im surprised that Harry found a book though that had the 13th use of Dragon's Blood in it... it did say it was top secret unspeakable information after all... meh, guess those bloody Black's got there hands on things they shouldnt all the time. Update soon! |
| Lord Master Phoenix 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseBravo... Bravo... Well written, i dont know what more to say, but well wrwitten and i am waiting eagerly for the next installment. I love the way you changed the intro many people start at the beginning buut i liked that first little bit explaining the backround of what happened vaguely after the death of Voldemort. I'm sorry that i dont have much help to give you but like your previous review what is the boy's name? |
| ivan the terrable 2005-11-26 ch 3, | abusedoes the boy have a name? |