i think that this is a very good peom and that if u were my ex-girlfreind i would take u back!

Interesting poem, something I can relate to. This was pretty damn good, keep it up.

I think i get it! wait...no i dont *(

This is simple, but very good

O-O" That is... very good. deeper than some, sadder than others, and much better than I could hope to write without some form of inspiration.