Wow.
Amazing story.
I love it.
Keep on writing, I love your stuff.
It's just too bad Kratos has to suffer.

That's a good story! I started to get tears in my eyes about the last bit...

I don’t know how long I stood there simply staring at the ground. After a time I heard footsteps walk up behind me.

“She was just a human, Kratos,” says the voice. It’s Mithos. No. Not Mithos. Lord Yggdrasil.

“So am I,” I remind him.

“No,” he says. “You’re an angel. You’re not human,”

I look down at the blood on my blade.

“No,” I say finally. “I guess I’m not,”

I turn and follow him. What more is there? Still I turn back, just once. A final pang of pain pierces my heart as I think of my son, my wife…both dead at my hands. Before I harden my heart once more I whisper;

“Perhaps I never was,”

Keep up the good work!

WOW!! I have to say...that part was really good!! I liked the immortality speach thing...it had a great lesson!! Well...I thought so anyway! The end was sad...poor Kratos...thinking he's no human...+kills Mithos+ I never liked him anyway! Oh well...like I said before...it was really good...hope to see more!!