 Mistress DragonFlame 2009-12-21 . chapter 8Yay! You up-dated!
But who is this human hunter? |
 tinabug 2009-12-21 . chapter 8I like where this is going |
 TrenchcoatMan 2009-12-20 . chapter 8hmm, seems like everyones getting ready for the final battle. And Youko, poor Youko, getting stuck, fighting for a mortal priestess... Honestly, Im surprised he gave up the shards so quickly, but then again, had he killed her, even he may not have been able toe scape the punishment.
Im curious. You have Gaara/Shukaku and you have Kyuubi. I dont recall, does Kyuubi in his human form look like Naruto?
and if so, what ever happened to the Naruto personality?
-TCM |
 loretta537 2009-12-19 . chapter 8this is a good story |
 Demoness-Of-Crystal 2009-11-16 . chapter 7I love it! |
 ShiTsukisama 2009-10-31 . chapter 7Update please. |
 AnimeKay89 2009-10-23 . chapter 7 I love your story a lot I really enjoy your characterization of both Inuyasha's crew, Youko, and Gaara. I also really like your OCs. keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next chapters. There was one thing I found kind of off and that was Kagome's reaction to the kiss I would think there would be more of a response, maybe it's just me. Any way good job and can't wait
Ja ne
~Kay |
 TrenchcoatMan 2009-10-20 . chapter 7woo, update.
good one too, moving the story right along.
:: chuckles :: ya might wanna check the last paragraph of the story. you wrote Hair instead of Hai. made me giggle but ya prolly wanna change it.
Will we be seeing Youko Kurama being killed and then returning from the future as Kurama in human form, [hopefully end of the series Kurama]
also, just a note about Shippo's murdered parents. I was under the impression that Naraku had nothing to do with their death, as I believe the Thunder Brothers killed his parents.
-TCM |
 Diane 2009-10-19 . chapter 7 I like it but there are some trouble spots. In the meeting section you have Youko talking to himself; hero comment by Youko, then this; “We?” asked Youko, chiming in for the first time since Gaara had really started his explanation. “Certainly you do not include yourself in that category.” & then a reply from Youko, I think the middle part is Kagome but it's not written that way. Also down at the bottom do you mean heir as in inheritor of title or posessions? Because hair makes no sense. |
 demon's purity 2009-09-19 . chapter 6omg i love Gaara! he's like one of my favorite Naruto characters! you should totally add alittle kagome/gaara romance :) update soon |
 Kuronueslover 2009-09-16 . chapter 6oh~!! pls update soon, author-sama!! |
 Shiori Yume 2009-09-15 . chapter 6NO! update please! ^_~
:meow: (doesn't work o this site.) but i love the fic so far so keep it up! |
 ShiTsukisama 2009-09-15 . chapter 5Update. |
 Diane 2009-09-15 . chapter 1 I like it so far. Just as an FYI women is more than 1, 1 woman, 2 women, etc. So neither Kikyou or Kagome alone would be women. |
 Serenity digo19 2009-09-14 . chapter 6omg what ever did they do to kougo and what will kagome do about youko kissing her i want some one "new" like garra to hit on kagome but this still needs to be a youko kagome pairing |