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Hermione Elizabeth Granger 4/18/06 . chapter 8
That was a short one, but I really liked it. I just want to find out who Annie is, and why Melody is there.
thewaytoheavan 1/9/06 . chapter 7
Please write more! Its really good...what happend to Hermione?

Plz read my story 'Just a dream'. It has 56 hits and no reveiws! Plz!

Thank u so so so so so so much!
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 7
Actually, I really, really liked this chapter. Thanks so much for the dedication, I'm glad I prove to be a little bit of inspiration and support for you.

So what happened to Hermione? Is she just lost in the "vertigo" (hee hee) as you called it? Can't wait for the next update!

I got my chapter finished tonight, too...but it won't be updated until I have time to actually type it up.
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 6
Harry's got himself in a tight spot, hasn't he?

Anyway, since I haven't put anything but comments in here so far, I'll actually say something about the chapters. So far it all looks really good, and your writing is amazing. The plot also seems to be very thorough, and I'm really enjoying your story so far. I hope you update again soon!
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 5
It's nice, how you've really thought everything out. It makes everything make a lot more sense. I really enjoyed this chapter, good job!
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 4
So Hermione can speak Greek, Latin, and Roman Latin? Wow. That's a lot. Anyway...didn't Harry take the invisibility cloak out to the Quidditch pitch with him?

So far so good!
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 3
That's different...yay! Well, not that Harry's gone...but it's going somewhere...not that it wasn't before...this one was a shorter chapter, but that's okay.

Continuing...
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 2
That's certainly interesting. And I even remember when you told me you were writing this chapter!

You know, this story isn't that different from what it was before...then again, I'm only in the second chapter.

Continuing on...
Hermione Elizabeth Granger 1/8/06 . chapter 1
You're right, it isn't really Ron-flavored, but it's still really good. I don't really have anything else to say...so I'm just gonna keep reading.
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