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| Cascaper 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseOh...that really was sad. I wish older siblings didn't so often change the way Terrence did-helpful to hateful. |
| IVIaedhros 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseImpressive...it's sad that we often hurt most the ones we should be closest to because we think they'll always be there. |
| Spyden 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThat made me cry... So I'm a little late to review...so what? Good detail, very good detail. I pictured every moment of it, which is impressive considering how short this is. Has anyone ever told you that you have an excellent vocabulary? This may be a bit late...but KEEP UPDATING! I know I am. :-) |
| Orlando Bloo 2007-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseSad :( |
| Scarfia 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseSo sad. It made me cry. You really have a gift for writing. |
| Duck go Quack 2006-03-23 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. Simply Amazing. |
| bloomacncheez 2005-12-10 ch 1, | abuseInteresting way to put that. I liked it a lot. I do wonder sometimes if Mac really feels that way... poor kid. Two thumbs up! This is definately going in my favorites! ;) |
| Ami 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse::sniffles:: Yeah, poor Mac. I really wonder what went wrong...why Mac kinda "lost" his brother in that sense, but I believe it has something to do with their father. It would make sense...Terrence rebelling after his father's loss (whether it be because he died or just left the family), and taking it out on Mac. ::sigh:: This was sad but so well written. |
| azure-tears 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, God, what a powerful message there. Poor Mac. When he was younger, he had his brother behind him. Now, all he has are the memories and the pictures. Okay, and now I feel a little teary. Oy. Really proves the power of pictures. |
| Hikari Elric 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseNICE!! I like. er- well keep it up! |
| Spice of Life (Not logged i... 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, that was very sad! I absolutley love Mac, and that was a very interesting way to show about Mac and Terrence. Very good! |
| popcorn 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw that was good |
| FlappyGal 2005-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abusethis was such a cute story, you are an awesome writer. i look forward to more chapters soon! |
| Fomalhaut 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThis story hurt me. Deeply. And I understand it all... I know far too well how feelings can change. Oh Terrence, why...? |
| TrudiRose 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was so poignant and sad! Beautifully written. I love the way you make the brothers' relationship real, much more than on the show. |