are you gonna finish, because I really would love to read the rest.

O.O !! please update soon! i really like this story (well these two stories). hopefully the fact that it's been over half a year since the last update doesn't mean you've stopped writing this one... cause that'd really suck...

great story love it so far can't wait for the rest

What is gonna happen next?? pleae update asap

Great job, don't let it be so long for thte next chapter.
Great writing you have done a fantastic job.

This is really good. I'm not so much into slash fanfic, but this is good. You captured the angst and pain the whole family, and Miranda are facing during this tragedy (Gordo's death). Keep up the good work!

wats with the "my heart would jump e erytime miranda would kiss me and when i slammed the door in her face when i found out she was cheating on me" was lizzie a lesbian with her or something

Write more please

update this is getting good already

i like. keep writing

Hey, it was really good how the scene was set as Lizzie grown up. There was one part that I didn't get though. When you said that Lizzie would jump everytime Miranda kissed her, what does that mean??! They're both girls!

This is a very interesting story, but why did you make Lizzie lesbian? I mean it's ok (i'm not, but watev) I just want to know why...